All Comments on 'Emma's Endurance Ch. 19'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
MORE!!!!!!!!!

i must hav more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

The train has left the tracks. Your story and characters are all over the place-no consistancy or at least an understandable trajectory.

Primary emotions are disgusted frustration and rage, not arousal.

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