All Comments on 'Emma's Massage'

I hope Emma liked the story. I didn't. And I do like massage stories. May be it would be more interesting if written in the 1st or the 3rd person. But using the 2nd person is really a big turn off!

Total lack of originality. Just sounds like ordinary cybersex.

i liked the story. i like the detail, it was like it was being done to me. it was sexy and sweet and it was good.