by kingsize77
Amazing, I love stories that end with a popshot in the girl's mouth :)
Started off fine but left me feeling indifferent. You have the makings of a very sexy story here but it finished too fast and wasn't very convincing. Nice try tho.
It all started so fast, much to fast in fact . it put me right off the story.. slowdown you dont need to rush.
The title is a question. She didn't seen to have any problem when the supposedly first dick was shoved up into her virginity. After a few moments she asked to ride a dick. Then she swallowed his male milk. These are things that virgins don't do so easily as you described.
stuff my cunt..... jeez..... really? it get that this is old but it would be cool if you'd revisit it and maybe grow it up a little. it has potential and you're a decent writer but it got weird and rushed.