All Comments on 'Employer Benefits'

by kingsize77

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Encore!

Amazing, I love stories that end with a popshot in the girl's mouth :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Employer Benefits

Rubbish

don87654don87654over 19 years ago
Good, but could be better....

First time......any birth control?

FCGuyFCGuyover 18 years ago
OK but...

Started off fine but left me feeling indifferent. You have the makings of a very sexy story here but it finished too fast and wasn't very convincing. Nice try tho.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
to fast

It all started so fast, much to fast in fact . it put me right off the story.. slowdown you dont need to rush.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
She was a virgin

The title is a question. She didn't seen to have any problem when the supposedly first dick was shoved up into her virginity. After a few moments she asked to ride a dick. Then she swallowed his male milk. These are things that virgins don't do so easily as you described.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Gayyy

CoyoteMadeMeDoItCoyoteMadeMeDoItover 4 years ago
you lost me at

stuff my cunt..... jeez..... really? it get that this is old but it would be cool if you'd revisit it and maybe grow it up a little. it has potential and you're a decent writer but it got weird and rushed.

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