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stuff my cunt..... jeez..... really? it get that this is old but it would be cool if you'd revisit it and maybe grow it up a little. it has potential and you're a decent writer but it got weird and rushed.

Gayyy

The title is a question. She didn't seen to have any problem when the supposedly first dick was shoved up into her virginity. After a few moments she asked to ride a dick. Then she swallowed his male milk. These are things that virgins don't do so easily as you described.

It all started so fast, much to fast in fact . it put me right off the story.. slowdown you dont need to rush.

Started off fine but left me feeling indifferent. You have the makings of a very sexy story here but it finished too fast and wasn't very convincing. Nice try tho.

First time......any birth control?

Rubbish

Amazing, I love stories that end with a popshot in the girl's mouth :)