All Comments on 'Encomium/Gangster Fairy Tale 03'

I honestly never thought I'd enjoy a story such as this, but I am glad to say I was WRONG! Wow, what a story! From the first sentence to the last, you caught my attention and made me truly want more! I truly came to feel like I knew each of these characters but what I loved most was the complexity of their personalities. So often, authors fail to remember that people, real or imagined, are complex and intricate beings; they are never as flat and one-sided as they so often appear. This story is a beautiful example of how an author can capture the essence of a character by simply including brief glimpses into their past in a moment of reflection. Well done! I can't wait to read more! (You ARE going to finish this someday, right????)

plus a gang of other shit. I hope to post the conclusion by the end of the month. Sorry.

Avenger

Just what Lit needed. Another lazy "writer".

out of it.