All Comments on 'Encountered Ch. 02'

This story was really well written and I love the plot! I just wish the chapters were longer! But overall, great job, can't wait to read the next parts!

2 good strong chapters full of feeling.

I wonder how dark it will get ?

hopefully there will be more soon, very good writer

You just need to proof read and maybe mane a little longer it you can

Have just caught up with this. Such suspense, I want to read more!

This is a amazing start ! I can see how this story would be a hot dominating story ! Please continue and don't leave before the action even starts!!

Please cont. Less submissive, more backbone for Alexia. Maybe she learned a little defense fighting so she can kick Nathaniel's a--.

I love where it's going so far but they stop so short :(

You demonstrate a fine potential as a writer. Please match that with an equal imagination!

Good resolve! However,there is no need for her to live in that apartment and be indebted to him in any way.She should face him on her own terms.

I agree with others that longer chapters would be better. We want more! I would also love to hear more about Lexi and Nathaniel's background and how their relationship started. The sex between them was hot. It will be interesting to see how Lexi's determination to fight her attraction to Nathaniel plays out. Can't wait for the next chapter!

I have spent a majority of my day writing chapter 3. As per the request of all who commented, the chapter will be significantly longer than the first two. It should appear posted within the next few days.

Thank you for reading!

I definitely appreciate where I believe this is headed. I can't wait! Short chapters or long, please keep going. My only piece of advice is "Don't rush". Let the story take shape as you see fit, and not based on the demands, opinions, and schedules of readers. I think you have great potential. :)

Iy your story tell it the way you want not others only because I seen it happen and seen writers gave up on there work because its not there its the public so keep it you. All I ask is you proof read

You have my interest. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I saw you posted a comment saying you'd be posting ch 3 in the next few days... That was in January. I hope nothing has gone wrong. I keep checking to see if you have updated anything. I'll be waiting. :D Melissa aka anonymous fan.