All Comments on 'End of the North'

This isn't really my catagory, but I found I really enjoyed it. There were quite a few unfamiliar phrases, but I'm guessing it's just British slang. Still, it wasn't overdone and I had no trouble following the narrative or dialogue because of it. I wish I had something more constructive to say, but I'm exhausted and heading off to bed. Just wanted to take a moment to say good job and good luck with your ratings.

Great story. Kept me interested and hard right up to the end. Always like it when guys pass their cum between them from mouth to mouth. Have done it several times myself, and really enjoyed it.

I have only recently discovered your pieces and the writing in this one is as good as all the others... a really great story that succeeds on so many levels