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I don’t think Cam and Emily will have no problems In the future… he lied to her about something important and also he tried to have sex with Max even though he was serious on Emily. Thanks to Max the didn’t hook up that day.
Great story! I laughed, cryed, got pissed. So it contained all the emotions needed for a great story. Thanks!🥰🥰🥰
I'm so glad I met Max and all of the people in his world. I couldn't stop reading and the ending is believable and beautiful. Thank you ingarlm, thank you very much for sharing.
I always feel more attached to the first love interest instead of one that comes mid-story, so I'm kinda sad there isn't a happy ending with him and Cam.
Despite that, it's well written and hot.
Great story until this chapter. People don't get jealous, controlling and violent only once. He knew about Paul being controlling after the confrontation and then gave up that concern completely. He welcomed him back when he said it wouldn't happen again. Not ok.
It was really a lovely story, but up until the very end I was wanting the tables to turn again and have Max end up with Cam. From an authorial standpoint I think part of this stems from introducing Paul as the second man and almost as a sort of plot device/counterpoint to Cam - the man he could have been - made his character always feel a little hollow to me. I found myself most attached to Max in the end. Great reading in any case!
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