All Comments on 'Enslaving Elliot Ch. 06'

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Anonymousover 14 years ago

The best short story expands!

Don't usually comment at the end but just finished this, and cant wait for the next chapter! Scrubs is usually forgotten in favour of Friends or Buffy in erotica,but its really good to have a dedicated writer capable of really capturing the personalities and motivations of the characters- keep them coming! (pun intended...)

Anonymousabout 14 years ago

Great need next chapt! ;)

Anonymousabout 14 years ago

Loved it. Elliot and Carla have always been the two sexiest girls on Scrubs, and, of course, it would be so hot to know what would happen. Hurry with the next chapter!

Anonymousalmost 14 years ago

Can't wait for the next chapter

Anonymousalmost 14 years ago

please keep writing this one.

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