All Comments on 'Enslaving Ev 02 Pt. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Now it is the girls turn

The boys have had their fun, now it is the girls turn. Can you say strap-ons and fisting? I knew that you could.

(OK, probably also dildos and a lot of licking.)

I can't wait to read it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
This is a horrible story

This is not BDSM, or any form of consensual D/s-M/s whatsoever. It's abuse, it's torture, and it's rape.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
This sucks

This is a forcible gang rape. Everyone of the “college students” is guilty of multiple felonies. Also the author clearly has no clue about the geography of the setting of the story... CAL Uni isn’t a school. I’m in the Bay Area and people call THAT university Cal, UC or just Berkeley... plus the closest beaches to Cal are in San Francisco, Marin and Sonoma counties... there aren’t any “abandoned” concrete boathouses on the beach. Now it’s possible that the author was thinking Southern California, but UCLA is UCLA, never Cal. I realize this is just a fictional fantasy, but it’s still crap

MASTERLEE9MASTERLEE9almost 2 years ago

Love what I am reading so far but how and when did Rika become MASTERS Si's slave? How did Rika get to have power over Ev/Celina? What is this I read abought the auction and Mei Ling? When and where did Ev/Celina get the TATTOO and be in a gang bang with 4 or 5 men? ( clbton@gmail.com )

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