All Comments on 'Envy Ch. 01'

I really thought the ending was great. A well written story. Thanks Rich

That was one hot story. I knew figured Ralph was gay before the ending but who cares. The sex was incredible. I hope you write more like that.

I'm only wondering because he calls her a whore, or do you mean a slut? Well, whatever...liked the story.

This was so GREAT! Loved it all! The characters, the writing, the story, EVERYTHING! I hope you plan on adding more chapters to this! So great!!

That was intense.... Please do not end this story and cont..

Wow that was really hot! Keep writing!