All Comments on 'Escape from Dominatrix Island'

A Sparse writing style (with minor errors) but I thought it added to the reading of the story rather than detracted from it. 👍 As a story itself it was quite enjoyable if a bit long. I don’t think it would have harmed the response to the story if it had been 5 pages instead of 8.

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I would have given the story 4 instead of 3 but it was the totally unnecessary chain smoking which, quite honestly, I found more and more annoying as the story progressed. 😡 I believe the story would have got a better reception, a 4 plus, without the smoking. If the story had been set decades ago it would still have been excessive.

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As for escaping from the island all he has to do is wait until the dominatrices all die of lung cancer. 🙄