All Comments on 'Eternal'

Im looking forward to this story unfolding. So far I am as anxious as her parents as to what the future holds. :)

Great beginning! I really like the plot and the girl is charming. I can't wait to find out more about the little boy and who he is. I look forward to the next installment.

A great start!!! Can't wait for more.

The child has a strange mix of childishness and maturity. Looking forward to finding out more about the boy. My mind is already racing ahead to the prophecies and what will happen when they come to pass.

When will be the next one?

Hey everyone, thanks so much for all the comments so far. Glad everyone likes it so far. I'm really glad that my first attempt has been recieved so well. Chapter 2 is being edited and revised thanks to sammi_jo. With out her you wouldn't be reading it at all. After chapter 2 I will try to post as soon as possible, but the story itself is in my head and I am having a little trouble with the flow and getting it the way I want. If you really want to know then email me and maybe you can give me the idea that makes it flow more smoothly for me. Thanks

Waiting, waiting I hate waiting.....lol.....Hurry patience was never my strong suit.

shannon isnt a county, it's a place in county Clare

I almost missed this. Chapter four posted today and I thought I'd take a look at the first chapter to see if it was worth catching up on. WOW, that's all I can say. I don't have the time because I'm going to chapter 2 right now!

Yeah, the little girl is so cute. She's an odd combination of childish innocence and maturity. Glad I found this! :)