All Comments on 'European Vacation Ch. 01'

by RodSamson42

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Good story

I wonder if she would lick a dude even further back than the balls.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
exchange rate

aww sad...5 euros is def. not $40 canadian...its like less than $10

DarkBeeDarkBeealmost 15 years ago
5 euros

And the 5-euro bill is grey; the 20 euro-bill is blue (if you'd like to know: from low to high: 5, 10, 20, 50, 100, 200, 500 and their colors: grey, red, blue, orange/brown-ish, green, yellow and purple).

Anyway, the story itself wasn't that interesting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Keine Leere?

"Keine Leere" is certainly not the german equal to No Vacancy. It would mean "no emptiness"

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
build...build...build...flop

What a good idea for a story. You set it up perfectly with characters dealing with a serious problem. The answer is well suited. They execute the plan and then all of a sudden there's nothing. The ending was really poor...it ruined the rest of the story. We don't know how the girls were affected by their experience. Hell, we don't even know if five Euros was enough to buy a meal. Did they get their replacement money? Your story begins as a roaring lion yet ended with a meow.

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