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by P_A_Solcrofft

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snowflake83snowflake83almost 12 years ago
WOW

I hope there's another chapter coming soon.

bigguy323bigguy323almost 12 years ago
The story is fine as a "stroke", but it sucks as a story.

In my opinion it would have been better had you allowed the characters to develop more slowly and realistically.

A "Rich Daddy's girl" does NOT get stranded at a gas station. Daddy's money solves all that sort of problems.

And on the "FIRST" night together he's already calling her a "bitch" and "Slut".

Then magically he just happens to work for Daddy.

Pure fantasy.

Sorry, it's just that the story could have really been a good one....

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Life has a way of giving inspiration to stories, even fictional stories. I am now able to tap into that more. This is my 10th year on this site, and am more able to read and edit other fine stories. I love to entertain people, in many ways. I like to meet new people and online...