All Comments on 'Evergreen Ch. 02'

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DWornockDWornockover 12 years ago
1*

unrealistic garbage.

palfreynet2palfreynet2about 12 years ago
Enjoyable Fantasy

I liked it. It's a little bit High School Boys fantasy but we were all young once. I'd like to see chapter 3 and more but can accept this as a fun read!

silentsoundsilentsoundalmost 7 years ago
Deranged

Raping your injured wife and having others rape her as well.

Charming.

May you reap what you sow. At least in fantasy land.

silentsoundsilentsoundover 5 years ago
Nice.

The wife is in a traumatic accident and hurt so the husband uses the opportunity to have someone repeatedly rape her and treat her like an object.

You are kind of a sick bitch but the original premise of amnesia could have had potential.

Unfortunately you are deranged.

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Bad

This story is sick on so.many levels. Author has severe mental problems if he thinks this is erotic.

26thNC26thNCabout 4 years ago
Can't

Author couldn't keep his job at Pep Boys, so he tried writing. Can't do that either.

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