All Comments on 'Every Breath You Take'

Lame as hell. 1 star is too good a rating.

I liked it, thought not as an erotic story itself. This is a good transcript for hypnosis, and close to what I have used myself in the past on a friend (minus that wonderful erotic bit). Thanks to you I feel a bit more interested in starting up again, and who knows, maybe this little story might yield some real world "hands free" results

Loved it. Shouldn't have read this right after zero, but both got me deep I would say. Although when I masturbate it brings me slightly up. Still excellent job.