All Comments on 'Everyday Collegiate Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Narcissistic prat!

Typical dickhead, leading with his (your?) prick?

Aways he (you?) gets to charm the good looking birds into bed!

In your dreams!

And I'm a bloke!

How about, for a change, she dumps him and he goes to pieces?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
This story has potential (once you have improved your -you're?- editing)

Great idea for a story. Great potential. Let's have this Casanova being kept on a long leash by this dolly, who has made clear how she wants things. Only after a long period of time should the two of them get in the sack.

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