All Comments on 'Exhalation'

great short story, beautiful metaphors, sexy characters and nice scenes. I could almost smell their lust....

When sisters reach a certain age, they develope a special affinity for each other, weather its shopping, mopping or sopping wet! When ripe young sisters are ready to go exploring, they usually start with each other. This is all part of lifes great experiments. Boys are much the same way and I will attest to that! If it were any other way.....HOW DULL~!!

Not Having Any "Surviving" Family, This Makes Me

Rather Sad. I Lost My LYounger Sister, Mom & Dad

When I Was 16 yrs Old. They Were Killed In And Multi

Vehicle Accident. Coming To See Me In A School Track

Meet.

Some Times I Dream That My Sister Karen Is In My

Condo & Bed

Kisses,

Kathy