All Comments on 'Experimental Earrings'

by Belakunn

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
a nice idea...

...but ruined by poor writing, terrible grammar, and the usual "my spellchecker knows best" spelling mistakes.

this could have been a fun story, and in the hands of a diligent editor it still could be. try harder, please: you owe it to yourself.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Posted too soon

You should have worked with an editor on this one. Idea is interesting but you did not pay it its due; the story needed work on plot characters, as well as grammar, and spelling.

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