All Comments on 'Exposing Carol, Again'

Well written very erotic, but I must say that I wrote a simular story about a year or so ago on another site, but I still found your version very exciting.

Amazing, as always!

Fantastic!!!

There is one mistake. "by" was written when you meant "my", somewhere near the middle of the story.

Thanks again!

I can't believe the previous comment was about a potential grammatical error. That's what editors are for.

I think this story was fabulous. Your characters are developing so clearly I feel I know them. This is very erotic and I love it. I can't wait for the next installment.

Where is Carols next exposure to Bbby Running Bear as promised in the way back story?