All Comments on 'Exposing Carol, Again'

Where is Carols next exposure to Bbby Running Bear as promised in the way back story?

I can't believe the previous comment was about a potential grammatical error. That's what editors are for.

I think this story was fabulous. Your characters are developing so clearly I feel I know them. This is very erotic and I love it. I can't wait for the next installment.

Fantastic!!!

There is one mistake. "by" was written when you meant "my", somewhere near the middle of the story.

Thanks again!

Amazing, as always!

Well written very erotic, but I must say that I wrote a simular story about a year or so ago on another site, but I still found your version very exciting.