All Comments on 'Extreme Pleasures Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

i hope this will go on soon - well done so far

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Ridiculous. At least Chap. # 1 made some sense, and was erotic. This was neither

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
nice idea

i get the idea behind the story , total & absolute , surrender to a potentialy deadly situation.

seemed to me as though the author lost interest in the story , or struggled to work with thier own concept ..

sometimes leaving holes in the plot for the readers imagination can work , but this time it fails miserably .

it's one of those topics , where fantasy sometimes does not translate into workable writing .

very dificult topic to work with . bdsm / fetish meets horror is a genre few authors can successfully tackle.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Pt 1: great. Pt2: went to shit QUICK. wtf. This story had soooo much potential of her “selling” herself off to the original abductors. Then went to this…. Smdh. Started strong. Went to shit quick. And I love extreme stories.

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