All Comments on 'Eye Candy Ch. 01'

Devilscandy,

Your story was very true-to-life. How many of us have been in stores and seen someone that we immediately felt a sexual surge accompanied with a desire to get to know 'more' about them.

What happened to your main character once she arrived home; was, I think very true to life. Which one of us, at one time or another hasn't done the same thing. Loved your story. Certainly held my interest.

Congrats on your first story.

duddle