All Comments on 'Falcon and Domino Ch. 13'

Thank you for bringing us this story - it is sad that it has to end, but then all things must; this has been very good throughout and I look forward to reading more from you in the new year. Well done - five stars.

I really enjoyed your story. I love how it ended. It was just so beautiful finding out that Domino was Sadie the whole time, it couldn't have ended better -5 stars.

I loved the whole story - in particular the way Domino proved her superiority to Falcon by constantly stripping him and jerking him off. I'm pleased it had a 'happy ending'. I also liked Raven who was so sexy, and hope she returns in her own story.

Though mostly predictable, it was a breath of fresh air on this site. A beautiful love story.