by DarkValentine
I have not scored your story yet, so often the first chapter starts out well, and then the rest 'goes to hell in a handcart' and in the story nobody wins and its very depressing. So wil score when I know how it will all end up.
I like this story, it seems pretty relaxed (at least compared to the rest of the nonconsent / reluctance stories on lit). With her already responding to his attentions I don't expect this to be a very long story, but that is certainly okay. Keep up the good work.
I like how the characters are developing. I cannot wait to see how this story progresses.
The story is very well written. The characters are coming along wonderfully. I love the sex and seriously need more. I am sure that Viola will continue in her natural contrary way and receive a few more spankings; I hope; fingers crossed; if horses were wishes. Getting the hint DarkValentine?