All Comments on 'Fallen Ch. 02'

The story is very well written. The characters are coming along wonderfully. I love the sex and seriously need more. I am sure that Viola will continue in her natural contrary way and receive a few more spankings; I hope; fingers crossed; if horses were wishes. Getting the hint DarkValentine?

Nicely done! Looking forward to the next chapter.

I like how the characters are developing. I cannot wait to see how this story progresses.

It's is so good ! I love it! Please update ASAP

I like this story, it seems pretty relaxed (at least compared to the rest of the nonconsent / reluctance stories on lit). With her already responding to his attentions I don't expect this to be a very long story, but that is certainly okay. Keep up the good work.

I have not scored your story yet, so often the first chapter starts out well, and then the rest 'goes to hell in a handcart' and in the story nobody wins and its very depressing. So wil score when I know how it will all end up.