All Comments on 'Falling for Jessica Ch. 02'

Good start. Literotica has a volunteer editor program; you may want to ask someone to proofread for you. It would improve your writing.

I absolutely love your storyline - keep up the good work

I can't wait for the next chapter.

That was so hot, waiting for the next Chapter.

I urge you to proofread carefully. Great story line. Looking forward to the next chapter. ChristieP

This is just an awesom, awesom story you've got going here!

Just love the warmth and love between the characters.

Good job and keep up the great work.

Doc

OMG girl you are so "wicked", but the story is "wonderful".

Don't worry about your hubby, he can always remain in the background, that's what makes this story so exciting.

Can't wait for the next chapter, your making me so hot.

The passion between your charachters is quite erotic. I love this story !

is it just your story? Yep, it's your story.

Character development in this is as hot as the sex. I was too eager to follow the story-line to notice anything else. I'll try to be more constructive in the next chapter.

For real already in love how shallow is that .... Then all of sudden she ready to leave the husband