Swipe to see who's online now!
- Sci-Fi & Fantasy
- Fallout Ch. 03
- Comments
All Comments on 'Fallout Ch. 03'
by lemaSierra
Sort by:
- 2 Comments
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoUmmmm, You Need One Thing
AN EDITOR!!!!! Large parts of your story are confusing because of your misuse of words, past/present/future tense and spelling errors.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoLoved it
You have been doing a great job with these pieces. I am excited to read more!
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Swipe to see more cams!
READ MORE OF THIS SERIES
Fallout Ch. 02Â Previous Part
Fallout Series Info
SIMILAR Stories
ChampionsÂ
4.86
715
250
The Power of NylonsÂ
4.73
39
16
Every Schoolboy's DreamÂ
4.74
647
76
Jackie's MomÂ
4.71
523
33
The Witch and the WatchÂ
More Stories4.56
319
20
