All Comments on 'Family Fun Begins Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Where's that FRAUD from Iran?

HE must b too busy fucking LITTLE BOYS! & Carrie, u'd think after 5 ch's, your grammar & tense would've improved. No such luck, I guess.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Your stories get us off everytime!

I blew two loads deep into my cousin after we read this story. I hope the next two stories are just as hot. We both love them! I think I might even be able to convince her to let me break her anal cherry after she read this!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Good Group of Stories

Loved the group of stories titled "Family Fun"

Very well written please write another series, maybe a follow up to this.

Thanks,

Mike

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
too fast at the end

A good story, indeed, and well written. But in the end you hurried up to much. It would have been a better story, if you hadn't come to an end too fast and made the story about half a page or a whole page longer.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
one of the best

You are a good writer Your Story "Family fun Begins" with all its chapters is one of the best in this excellent site

Keep writing . Thank you

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