All Comments on 'Family Gatherings Pt. 04'

please continue. very well written. u paint the story so well!

You have a great story going here and I hope you don't ruin it like some writers do. I liked that when Josh and Beth talked and said that nothing will be done without the other one there is good. But then towards the end you changed it to either one is there or promise to tell the other. Keep it with one of them having to be present.

Have really enjoyed it so far. I agree that the "both be present" rule should stay, however Beth already broke it to be with her siblings. She should be punished. Lightly and with humor. Or reward josh with a "go have fun" romp . Josh's sister should also pop in . Oops forgot I invited her cause she said she couldn't make it

Thanks so much,

SliperyRox

Please continue this GREAT family saga. It's very well written and has kept me hard as a rock while reading it. Keep up the great work.