All Comments on 'Family Isn't Blood - Fred's Life Ch. 03'

Having to skip over the stupid sex is a bother.

Otherwise a good story.

You should remember that, having read three different explicit descriptions of sex, you have read them all.

Sex is nice, the repetitive descriptions become boring.

The love of your culture, and of all positive family cultures is evident. The sex scenes are fine, if improbable for people of this age. But who cares, its fiction. I understand it is all part of the plot, but his inconsistent intelligence and stupidity, as illustrated by his life choices, makes him easy to like but difficult to respect. Zophia just fell back into his life. Letting her go the first time was dumb enough, but then replacing her with Rita should make her wonder if this guy is the impetus of so many Polish jokes. Come on, how could he have even been drawn to Rita after having experienced Zophia? That's no joke.