by wieliczka
As soon as Kaja appeared "3-way" popped into my head. I'm sure it did for most readers. The only clueless person here is Fred. Do you really see him as so dense? I suspect you are trying to create drama and suspense, but you just make this guy appear like some dumb schmuck. Not your best chapter. Might have been better to just have Kaja appear in their bedroom, with Fred prepped for a surprise 3-way, then, after the sex, have Kaja's reappearance explained. The 3-way was a forgone conclusion, so it was clumsy trying to make that happen as a surprise.