All Comments on 'Family Tradition of Bondage Pt. 04'

But I'm sure some will love it

I am really enjoying this story and can't wait for more chapters. I could quibble about some of the plot points or argue the female psychology, but heck, its a sex fantasy and lots of fun. More, please.

I am so enjoying the story. It is certainly told by one who has experienced many feelings.

Very well written.

A little 'preachy' perhaps :)

But gives good arguments.

So yeah, it's ok..

yoron

I appreciate all the build-up and substance that you tried to give this chapter. It has legs to stand on with all the time you took on that. Unfortunately, you omitted half of the first sex scene, IN A SEX STORY! I had higher hopes for the first time between Sherri and Robert. The way he takes his time as a Dom and respects her and eases her into the lifestyle is totally abandoned in the expedited climax of their first love-making. I know things will be redeemed in future chapters, but this definitely was disappointing. :(

Déjà Vu almost like in this story happened to me. When I was twelve years old I dreamed of a woman with red hair put up in the Antebellum ringlets from Georgia. When I was in Vietnam I wrote to a woman for nine months before returning to the USA. Two days after we met in person we married. This coming February will be out golden anniversary. She had red hair. She put her hair up the same way as my dream and even wore a dress like the dream woman. She is a Virginian, but was born in Georgia while her father was in the Army Air Force in WWII.

she'd have to be awful shallow as a per son to be bought off with a few pieces of jewelry. I don't think her pride would let her get over the being treated so badly [pain and humiliation] when she first arrived there. strung up and beaten and all that pain, more than she'd ever been in in all her life. i don't think she'd forgive and forget that so quickly. sublimal messages in music is not that effective that it would brainwash someone in just a day.

She loves him a single day after hating him? He's just another rich asshole it seems :/