by SavannahMann
I have enjoyed all of this story. can there please be more of Sherri & Robert.
Well done S-M! Your characters and details are strong and oh
so vivid. Nicely plotted and tightly 'voiced'; it will be a
real pleasure if we can have a Pt 8 or more! Thank you for
some mighty fine "southern" writing!
Great read. I was sorry to see the end of it. I'd like to see a continuation.
My only question is about the title. I never did figure out what "Family Tradition" had to do with it.
Considering this chapter was virtually non-erotic, I enjoyed it immensely. The suspense is awesome. I love how there are what seem like millions of details that actually make it more like a recognized best seller than a raunchy 2 page story (not that those aren't awesome at times). I can get by without the sex, IF the story is good enough. It is. Good job.
It´s crazy considering this part hasn´t to much sex it was my favorite part of the series so far it had a lot of drama and psychological writing that amazed me good job.
It seems there may be a lot of subtle poking fun at many, many stereotypes in this fic, I enjoy that. Especially the sadness of the poor computer geek who realized she couldn't appreciate his knowledge at all! He couldn't possibly pick 'the best' laptop- best for what purpose? Duel core is so old now- lol.
ready to collapse when he met her the accident and trauma he added pushed her over the edge otherwise this story is like a bad harlequin romance even those girl's put up more resistance and had more core personality lol