All Comments on 'Fantasies'

snore. had to skip over most of it, just boring. keep trying though, try to learn more about writing though. creating mood better, emotion, much less erotica. it is not just typing

good luck

it does need a little work but noones perfect i know im not. keep trying you will get better with each one.hope to read more because you do have some talent for it it just takes time to get it down.good luck on future storries.

Some things come out of nowhere in the story, but I guess the point is to get to the action without developing how the narrator has bi fantasies earlier in the story then just when a cock is presented.

Wonderful opening to a great adventure. Looking forward to a sequel.