All Comments on 'Fated Destiny Ch. 01'

Tricks and treats with twists and turns, great story...Good LUCK (*_*) HAPPY HALLOWEEN

Even though it's just a story, the scientist's remarks were informative, and made this tale more special than the typical Erotic Horror fare. You may like my own entry, Who Killed Lois Laynes?, in the New section. Feel free to vote/comment on it. Good luck!

Pretty hot start. Compelling characters and well-paced, this could be a good little series.

This story is a wonderful foundation. I am interested in finding out more about Parta and this sex vampire! Your stories are so well developed and the sex is secondary to the plot. Great job, Mr. Evans!

I was hesitant to read this because of the Horror category, but have enjoyed your other submissions so much that I finally gave in. I am very glad I did. Please write more!!

I have only just come across this story,and really enjoyed it.Not to sure about the German(?) accent though.