All Comments on 'Fated Hearts Ch. 09'

great chapter i can hardly wait for the next one

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5 stars

story!!! I can't wait to continue reading it, in your next chapter!!

Five.

what to expect w/one of your chapters but am always pleasantly surprised. You have created a world that is so full of surprises for the good guys which I always like. Now sharing real objects in a dream world, what a clever idea. So is what they are experiencing more than a dream? I'm really looking forward to the next chapter and will follow your instruction if you fail to post again soon, hey you brought it up. hehe-he

There is hope in their strange situation. They believe in each other so strongly that failure is not an option for them.

more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You cant leave it there! 5* hun and im wwiting impatiently for the next chapter.

I love the story line and your characters are addictive. The one problem I have is that in this chapter there were some errors with your typing and some of the characters names and sentences started missing. It made it a little frustrating to continue reading. And I really want to finish this story, it's getting good. Syn'