All Comments on 'Feeding the Emptiness Ch. 01'

an absolutely wonderful start - cant wait to see how the story continues <3

Short but lovely! Good writing, looks promising!

with mBrow, this looks very promising. What happens next?

Of course, my compliments for good writing skills, excellent dialog, a nice intro with the soldiers (I'm almost sure they'll get in the way at some point), and a delicious sexual enticement in the mirror.

Damn ! That was hot!!!!!!!!!

Wonderful start, looking forward to the next installment!

Can't wait for more!

This is my uncounted time reading this tasty treat. Ooo yummy, this writers description of enrapturing Ava. Gets my pulse a racing. I've enjoyed reading a number of stories and series. Keep up the wonderful entertainment.

5🌟's and a dozen roses🌹