All Comments on 'Felicity Ch. 19'

Very staccato, and very unemotional. It's more like reading a news report than a story. Didn't engage me or draw me in, so I didn't finish the story.

This is what I asked for a while ago.

It does have a few hiccups where some critical

proofreading would have caught them, but nothing

to cause a problem. I enjoyed the story.

Please keep writing about the folks in Felicity.

Thanks, Bob T.