All Comments on 'Feral Passions'

Good start and a nice twist on a Were story. However, you really do need an editor. Your phrasing is a little clumsy which distracts the reader from your story. You are doing the heavy lifting here, but with the help of someone to polish your story you will do very well here on Literotica.

Good Start...Bravo!

This is a great story so far and it flows really well for you not having an editor. I am really liking the mix of the supernatural and the sicfi this is a great touch and looking forward to reading more. Thank you for sharing Mechmanas

So far it is looking like a very good, possibly great story. Your writing seems fine to me, but then again writing is not my thing. I hope that you keep going with the story. I would like to read more.

Great start and nice twist to the usual theme :) keep it comeing

great start as others have said, also, an editor :D ... aside from that longer chapters... ESPECIALLY in the nonhuman area + were... dont compact, or i should say, try to expand more... it felt EXTREMELY rushed!

Technical issues aside, great beginning and good storyline flow. Can't wait until your next installment. A simple editing technique is to read the story out loud, tape it and then play it back. Good luck.

Great work, unique voice and vivid imagery. Write again, soon, or we may have to send a cyborg after you.

Sending my own creation after me the cliche irony is killing me. I will have the 2nd chapter up as soon as possible as I am just having someone who offered to beta read it for me taking a look at it (some people will envy him). While I wait I am still considering changes and am writing chapter 3. So no cyborgs need to be sent yet.

Please post more SOON!!

but when are you going to post the next chapter anytime soon?

I really really liked that please keep writing and come out with another chapter soon cant wait to read it

Can't wait to see how it continues.

Fear this will be one of those great but unfinished stories.

HURRY UP AND UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is an interesting intro to the story, but please add more!

Please write more soon.

I'd love to read more.