All Comments on 'Field Trip'

Hopefully there's a part 2 maybe ???

I like the start. Hot.

Great start, cant wait for the followup

Excluding shower sex of course

But a nice plot thou other than that

I love it when there is an age difference between two lovely women.Rampant Male

that was just what I needed tonight..

Great story but it left me "hanging" and wanting more, so much more.

Why was there never a chapter two?

There's a French culinary term: Amuse-bouche.

It means to tickle/tease the palate. Leaves me wanting more...

Please and Thank You!

Love, sue

...and I am already hooked! But you mustn't leave us wanting - tell us what happens next, please. Lovely story...V.

So I need to borrow your panties so you will have to come get them...that is a plan.. kisses, your Peach

That's certainly a very short and exquisite amuse-bouche.

Love it very erotic.

This made me imagine so much more of the story, of the desires of each of the women.

Prrrs

I don't know why but I had an instant image of Chloe Fineman (from SNL) in my head for Miss Smith. I love the instant attraction, the tease, and the promise of more to come. The exposition could have had some more kissing and pinching to break it up. hehehe

So Good!

Needs a follow up!