All Comments on 'Finding a Lost Puppy Ch. 21'

There is much more of this to be told I think. You wrapped up most of it, but there could easilly be a part ii

You do have a gift for weaving a tale (tail?). Please do write more with Rick, "Puppy", and Lilly as the central characters.

Thanks for the recipe instructions....many thanks for a great story...it had its rocky moments as you know, when it got to dispersed but all in all it came back into focus and finished well.

Good job!

I liked all the chapters. 5 starts.

This last one was a little rushed. Trying to tie all the loose ends up and be finished.

Like I kind of doubt the Sarah is ready to be a Domme. She is going to need a lot of help.

Steve

...Ouch! That Bitch Mistress of Creativity swings a mean whip.

In mu opinion, realistic-fiction stories, such as this one, do not have "The End"s. As in Real Life the stories are endless.

People are born and live and die. Come and go from our notice. Rise and fall like the tides but the journey we are all bound to, continues forever.

If the author is so inspired or imagineers new events and characters, even years later, there is no reason not to continue.

Great story hated to see it end would love to see a part two with lily in mix but since its been three years since to last update seems I will have to do without but great story thanks for sharing

A very enjoyable story, thank you both.