All Comments on 'Finding a New Doctor'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
A little too easy

This story line is good but nothing is this easy. Try and make the story flow but with a little more anticipation and drama. A first meeting, no matter how horny the players, takes more time to play out, unless you're with a paid escort.

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