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Click hereThough she was still unsure what she would do, Meg left the lunch meeting feeling better about everything in general. Now came the hard part: could she accept that she was in love with a woman and stop fighting her feelings for Kate. And if she could, did she have the courage to follow through.
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Yeah, I'm in the "Jade was too easy on Vivian" camp. I don't give a fuck how "drawn" Viv and Ari were to one another, they should have had the common decency to talk to Kate, in light of their history with her. In Kates's place, I wouldn't forgive them, I'd just forget them.
Was going to go off on a rampaige, decided to have some patience and read some comments. I agreed with most of them to some degree, read Shikes comments and really agreed. I am not sure why you choose to have Ari and Viv behave that way, with little or no forthought to the hurt they would cause. Could be that going down that particualar rabbit hole was difficult for you. Not sure but by trying to gloss over a major crossroads cheapened your story.
accept the Viv/Ari relationship.
The betrayal of Kate is totally unforgivable. After all that Kate did for her, even a naive sub like Ari should have had the ovaries to go to Kate and tell her she was uncontrollably drawn to Viv and wanted to explore it. Kate would have been hurt, maybe angry, but she would not have been betrayed.
The clincher for me was Ari giving her virginity to Viv, something that Kate was too kind to try to take too soon.
OK, I get that EVERYONE could tell Kate was hung up on Meg. Hell, she says more than once that she has a crush on her.
But Megan has made it very clear that she is flattered but not interested, but Ari has the magic insight to see that Meg IS interested, an lo and behold, presto change-o, and Meg is seriously considering it? Strains credulity a bit.
And I agree with adidasgal, she should have clobbered Viv. When she walked into the office and "threw her purse on the couch", she should have swung it at Viv's head!
"Ari told me that you were always gentle. You never pushed her or made any demands of her. That was sweet and kind of you but that wasn't what Ari needed. She wants and needs someone in her life to take charge of her, lead her, love and guide the submissive in her." - So why COULDN'T Kate take charge. Wasn't that why she and Viv didn't work, because they were BOTH dominant personalities?
"I never wanted to hurt you. I love you, I really do," - I'm sorry, gotta call BS on that one. If you love someone, and don't want to hurt them, then guess what? YOU DON'T HURT THEM! After her talk with Terry Ari should have gone to Kate, explained her feelings and ended it. Instead she LIED and CHEATED. Those are NOT acts of love!
"I hope things work out better for you with Viv than they did with me," Kate said. Sad, she took her purse and walked away, out of the apartment and out of the club. - MUCH too gracious. Should have told them both to go to hell, and tell Ari not to come crying when Viv dumps her.