by Meridian13
this was a very fast moving actioned pack adrenalin pumping chapter! I'm more sad that it's coming to an end - thanx for sharing such a wonderful gift of story-telling... you have me on edge biting nails, pulling hair... screaming and crying each and everytime!
Thank you for sharing this story I had been checking back daily to see if the next chapter had been posted, you are a fantastic writer. I am sad that this story will be ending there seemed so much more for you to explore please tell me there will be a sequel !!!
firstly, excellent story overall if a little strange at some points. my only complaint is the whole pheonix(yes i dont know how to spell it, ha ha) thing. It is just disturbing when she is locked up, massive co incidence that she just happened to turn 18 on that day. Also it doesnt really fit that your adding in a new story now. It might have been better if you had written it seperatly at a point after the current events. To be honest i have run out of complaints now XD. nice story though
I am so glad you came back to finish this story. it is wonderful
please please please
when will the chapter come
totally can't wait !!!