All Comments on 'Finding Mr. Wrong Ch. 02'

by peacefulwhisper

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sherlock40sherlock40about 19 years ago
Great story so far.

Very enjoyable to read about the slow seduction to submission. Thank you for your time and effort in writing this story.

rgraham666rgraham666about 19 years ago
Very good

Woof! (Fanning myself)

That was good. With just a few paragraphs, you've created sexual tension so thick it can be cut with a knife.

Very much looking forward to where you're going to go with this.

Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Can't wait for Segment #3

I had really liked the first one and was waiting for the next, which was just as good as the first. I know the 3rd will just be even better!

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