by chatbug
Why can't the males be men and the females be womem?
The infinite variety of the world we share is awesome. Fun to read. I would have never thought of such an odd arrangement. Always fun to think about something new.
Xantu
Well written and from a unique POV. I wouldn't be Gilbert but I can now appreciate his preference.
Second, as to "why submissive". Because if everyone was the same life would be dull. Because variety actually is the spice of life. If reading about D/s bothers you, quit reading BDSM stories.
Great story and very interesting POV as some enlse said earlier. Most stories along these lines are written from the sub's POV. The only thing missing - maybe - was a little bit more about what Gilbert was feeling.
Chastity, smoking, breast bans...this is as good as it gets. I wish I wrote this...
I think Glbert could have used a little more punishment which probably would have turned him on. While denying him orgasms, something like a strap on didlo or face sitting would have really turned Gilbert on. Add in a cane ass whipping and Gilbert would be in his glory. Possibly getting banged by Jake would have made Gilbert really feel ultra submissive. And isn't that where Gilbert likes to be?
This was a very good story with fine attention to detail. There was a bit that jarred and that was when she took Gilbert's cage off and only then chained him. Of course it should have been the other way. But this also made me feel that Gilbert was a bit too uncaring about his erections. This was too easy for him. You want him to be doing this stuff but it isn't easy . It was good that there was no whining from Gilbert,he was true to his word and did what he said he would. The chair was a good idea and it was good to know that Gilbert really was deprived concerning her breast but had learned to stay away, it would have been well if the effects of the sandpaper were described,and Gilbert's appearance on his buttocks.It would have been good if Jake had seen Gilbert leaving after the weekend after being unlocked and serving the whole time but without any reward at all-just so that he saw that.The atmosphere in the home was calm and restful and everyone was happy, but especially Miss.
At last a good story about tease and denial that doesn't turn into a story about sissification. To me that is a whole different fetish. What you have described here is exactly what my fantasies are. Funny thing i'd like to be either guy in the story. Lol