All Comments on 'Fire Ch. 11'

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I can't thank you enough for writing this story, and this chapter was well worth waiting for, you weave a beautiful tale and I can't wait for more from you.

I'm so glad to see you writing again- this chapter is exceptional, and I can't wait for the next!

if i had a tail! it would be totally wagging! i love you soooo much :D now I'm going to go read your story :] i just had to tell you how awesome you are first

Canadian bacon rocks! please and thanks

I'm so glad to see that you've added to this story!

You have been missed ... absolutely loved it :)

So exciting! This was my favorite chapter yet. The emotional development between Thea and Jarius is great. I especially enjoyed the tenderness of the last page. I cannot wait for more! Thank you so much for sharing your imagination with us!

No, no, no! A conclusion would mean no more chapters, and I am far too attached to your fantastic story and characters!

Well, great chapter! I couldn't love your story more!

What can we say - we have missed you so, but our craving has been sated for now. Please don't make us cry again and let the story flow x

You're the best...!!!

I LOVE your story!! Thank you for this chapter, can't wait for the next!!

We all knew it was going to happen. Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one! Thea's anything but stupid--she'll come around.

I hope you write more soon. I have enjoyed your story a lot! Thank you for sharing.

Worth the wait! That was the most amazingly visual scene when Jairus entered the courtyard! I could only dream of writing such an explosive description of him decimating those men and then fluidly throwing that spear! I bow to you!!! I have to say, I am finally glad Thea is changed now and can’t wait to read how they move on from here!

Wonderful story and I would gladly wait months again for another chapter!

I am so glad I checked to see if you updated. Your ability to pace the action and bring real "life" to your world is amazing. Thea remains refreshing and strong. Jairus is action hero, dangerous, vampire hotness. I eagerly await the next chapter. Thank you for sharing your talent.

I missed you! Keep writing, you really have a skill for it. Eagerly awaiting future work!

I am glad I checked to see if there was any updates. This is a wonderful story. It has action, conflict, romance, sexy. Can't wait for more. It was a long time coming.

I keep checking for updates and was so happy to see this, well done! I love Jairus and Thea

I always knew that changing was inevitable but Thea didn't and it must be a shock not to have a choice. I just hope she realizes how much Jairus loves her and that he blames her for nothing. This chapter was full of action and very exciting. I love Thea's bold and independent spirit. That should pull her through this difficult transition. I can only hope that you choose to update more frequently, as waiting for months can be very frustrating. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Dude, seriously, you've got one hell of an imagination. I love this story, and I can't wait for the end. Then, I hope you'll start another one!

Can't wait for the next installment! Soon, please!

I'm so pleased I went and checked ur page for updates. I love your stories I get so involved in them. When your heart aches for a vampire you know you are reading a quality writer. Thank you for the story, the emotions and the love.

I love this story and I am anxiously awaiting the continual to it. You are a very talented writer. I am so happy I took the time to slowly read this story so that I could better understand and appreciate it. I just love this story. I will forever be a loyal fan of yours.

You certainly are one of my favourite authors. You write incredibly well, but I'm sure you know that already. ;)

So help me god if you make us wait another 6 months for the next installment...I guarantee I will rally all your fans and we will tie your hands to a type writer till you finish. Please take this as the extreme compliment it is. Amazing work.

Wow this was a very raw and emotional chapter I really dont know where the story will go from here but I can't wait to find out!! Pleaseee update soon!!

-MK

awesome story, but next chapter please?

begging for the next one here.....

lol

Thank heavens I ran across this chapter, I nearly lost your story and it's really gripping, love all the characters and the world you pain. Well done.

SO glad it's not quite finished!

I just checked today on the off chance you updated, and you have, but it hasn't gone up yet.... now the wait is more painful because I know it's written!

I will be checking back every half hour in anticipation!!!

So glad I discovered you story...can't wait to finish reading!

Nothing else need to be said.

I am so glad that this story will continue!