All Comments on 'Fire in the Night Ch. 05'

finally he gets to take her... and she's a virgin no less.

This is a terrific series: Well done.

Tease tease!! like all good things if it is long slow and enjoyable its best.

Well done girl you have retained the mystery so I am bound to want to read the next part.

Keep it up. great work

Peter.

wow sunnylynn well worth the wait. Cant wait to hear what is in store for Jack and Caitlin next.

Well worth the wait. You surely have a way of drawing people into the story. Keep up the good work, can't wait for the rest

VERY likeable characters plus an interesting, well-written story (sans erotica). May I suggest 21 more chapters covering seven more states with each state being honored by one your slylish, loving sexual celebrations.